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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities?? What are possible solution for these problems?

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Increasing major cities are the greatest problem worldwide.
Although
 the phenomena create many problems for young
people
 or senior citizens,
people
 are not caring about
this
. The causes of awareness and convenience; should be addressed separately. There are a lot of problems that have to face young stars.
Firstly
, the main problem is the jobless and the shortage of housing. Raising the population of cities young
people
 do not find a suitable
job
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 and appear to lack a house.
In addition
 , traffic jam is badly increased. All
people
 are moved from rural areas to
the
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urban site. Because of
this
, transport is expanding than the route. In my country,
for instance
, traffic jams enlarge 50% more than before. There is not enough space for pedestrians as well as there are not any alternative roads. That’s why
people
 have to face huge crises.
On the other hand
, these problems have lots of solutions. If
people
 are not wake up on time, they have to pass a miserable situation. Young
people
 have to divide in two ways. Some have to stay in rural areas and some go to urban areas.
As a result
, there will not be gathering in one place and youth will get their preferable job.
Furthermore
, the shortage of houses will be reduced. The
second
 solution is, that
people
 have few uses for vehicles. Decrease to use of private cars and increase
to
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the use of bicycles.
For example
, my home-to-office distance is about 2 kilometres.
Nevertheless
, I always go to my office walking. It helps to remove traffic jams and helps to keep me fit. In conclusion, it is a vital crisis for the whole nation. Government should take
also
 some steps regarding these circumstances. If
people
 are more knowledgeable about their lifestyle process we recover from
this
 trouble.
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