The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
it Can not
be ignored that the modern lifestyle is an advanced version of our ancestors' way of living. the inclination toward not accepting elders' opinions as being conducive to nowadays life is growing. personally, I believe that the traditional way is still partially applicable.
I support Correct your spelling
It cannot
this
idea as I think these kinds of thoughts of our grandparents are based on the rules of nature. in
fact, in the past, when there was no sign of technology, mankind needed to adapt Capitalize word
In
himself
to the conditions imposed by its environment. Correct pronoun usage
itself
otherwise
, he would not survive. consequently
, our aged people try to teach us what they have learnt so that keep us alive. in
other words, the advice we Capitalize word
In
received
from the elderlies, they Wrong verb form
receive
are
proven by experience. which is why adolescents are encouraged to consult with the seasoned ones of their families.
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is
however
, it is needed to take today's situation into account. the reason is some of the old-fashioned tips are whether
not applicable or not required anymore. to extend the former, it is hard to follow the tradition of getting married at a young age Change preposition
apply
in
the current time. the cause is the difference in the Change preposition
at
economical
condition compared to when our elders were in their youth. Replace the word
economic
also
, here is a convincing example to illustrate why some of the tips are not needed anymore. when you visit a grandparent in the winter season, most probably he or she will criticize you because of not wearing several layers of clothes. it is clear that
the quality and sufficiency of modern clothes are not comparable with what was available decades ago. which, more than one piece of them was required to keep you warmed up.
in conclusion, I believe all of the traditional ideas must be heard and then
we filter what is suitable for our modern lives.Submitted by someone on
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