Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Advertisement is commonly used by
organizations
. Few people
believe that promoting the products
motivates people
to buy things that they are not really required but, other feel that it inform people
about the new features that could enhance their lives. I strongly believe that the promotion of products
always tries to sell the brand and it targets children
for business.
Companies are primarily focusing on selling the brand name instead
of their products
. Many organizations
in society concentrate more on brand
name, but they forget to give importance to Add an article
a brand
people
preferences. Change noun form
people's
For Example
, the logo of the company is displayed in a supermarket without providing any information on their products
. Moreover
, some organizations
use a model to promote their products
. Still, it is unclear to everyone, what is the purpose of the model while selling the product to the customers
.
On top of that, companies target young children
to sell the products
easily to their parents. Many organizations
display their products
using animation as well as a comic buffoon
to attract young Fix the agreement mistake
buffoons
children
. For instance
, in all the supermarkets, attractive display boards are used to promote the products
by using the Dora serial characters. Moreover
, advertisements is
always to attract new Change the verb form
are
customers
. The essential of advertisement is to get new customers
instead
of giving importance to existing customers
.
To conclude, advertisements are essential to the business, but it is focusing on the company logo instead
of people
's needs as well as they should focus on the entire customers
,not children
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite