You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to accommodation office at the college. In the letter, - Describe the situation - Explain your problem and why it is difficult to work - Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Dear Sir Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you

some

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of the problems I found

at

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the dormitory

room

, where I am sharing with another student. Before I explain the current situation, I would like you to know that I have no intention to make any personal attack and I am simply telling you what I have experienced. By far I find the situation is very fragile and it is very hard to deal with him.

First

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of foremost, my roommate made so much noise quite a few times and it seems that he did not want to change even though I requested him so many times not to make

such

things.

Secondly

, he brought his guest very often while I kept complaining to him not to bring anyone anyhow without letting me know prior.

Besides

, he has no discipline at all and the

room

is a mess. All of these problems always contracts me from my study and I am extremely worried if I can do well in the

next

coming exam. Apparently, sharing the

room

with

this

type of colleague is not really comfortable

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me.

This

is why I would

to

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request

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single

room

if there is any available in the college. May I request you please

to

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consider

this

scenario

in

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top

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priority and let me know as early as possible because the exam is around the corner and I need

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high score indeed in

this

test

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Sincerely, Chris