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Handwriting skills (using a pencil, a pen or a brush) are on decline. What can be the reasons for this? Is it a positive or a negative development?

#skills #pencil #pen #brush #decline #development
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 world, the usage some of
equipment
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the equipment
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such
 as
pencil
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pencils
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,
pen
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 or even
brush
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been
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increased because of technology, the trend of
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 life of humans and new
gadget
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 which we can
use
them
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instead
 of old-fashioned, force us to
use
 less
from
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pen
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 and books. in
this
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i
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 going to say why
this
 trend is happening and
also
it
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 can help human
being
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 to improve themselves or not. The
first
 reason is
developing
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 and technology. day by day world
introduce
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a
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new thing, so, we should adapt ourselves to these changes. with
the
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tablets, emails, eBooks and smartphones we do not have to write with
pen
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a pen
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, pencil or even brush because these days people are painting on tablets.
for instance
, in the past people used to write telegraph so they need
pen
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a pen
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 but today you just type with your keyboard. another reason is typing is absolutely faster than handwriting skills and
specially
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 companies prefer
this
 method and if big companies
use
 typing, ordinary people have to
use
 it too.
however
, it is a negative development for
art
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 field. most of the
artworks
 have been made by
hands
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 so if handwritings skill be ignored,
artworks
 would
destroyed
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 too. for
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examples
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 there would not
any
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 calligraphy or
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other
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others
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artworks
.
on the other hand
, it is
efficiency
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developments
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 for saving environments.
use
 paper and pencil have ruined or nature so
this
 change can help to solve
this
 problem. to sum up,
developed
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country
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countries
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 should control the amount of
consume
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 of writing equipment to save
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the environments
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environments
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 and
also
 try to save
artworks
 which they need handwriting skills.
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