Some people think that arts (such as painting and music) does not directly improve the quality of people's life, so governments should spend money on other areas. Do you agree or disagree?

In our modern society, the development of the economy and
culture
cannot lack contribution to the
arts
because it brings a multitude of advantages to serve everyone. Some
people
believe that the government should earn money in other zones but from my point of view,
arts
which
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completely help develop the economy and
culture
.
First
and foremost, in the world, improving international relationships is important for the growth of a nation. The countries can transfer and share
culture
from
arts
such
as paint or music which help connect
people
with
people
and special these things
influence
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from
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BTS who
are
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a group music
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group music
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famous in the global. They broadcast Korean
culture
from Korea to America, China, Thailand, Vietnam, etc.
Furthermore
, the relationships will become friendly and close because of the impact of the picture, music,
actors
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and actors
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to reappear history or propagandize images and language
culture
,
moreover
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it
also
makes the add beautiful of a nation.
On the other hand
,
the
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art not only brings quality entertainment but it
also
a large
contribuild
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contributed
taxes
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to taxes
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to increase the government budget which can be used for a wide range of purposes.
Additionally
, entertainment increases a huge source of income for nations.
For example
: total sales of screen film in Vietnam in 2019 was up 4100 billion ( up 26% compared with 2018), the movie in Vietnam accounted for 29%
sales
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of sales
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with over 1150 billion and dramatic growth
with
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40% compared with 2018. Obviously, these things improved
quality
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the quality
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of life significantly. It helps
people
decline stress after hours of work and creates emotion
to
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everyone. In fact, it can decrease the negative which makes them
more happy
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,
confident
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and confident
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anywhere. In conclusion,
arts
are affected by relationships and economics.
Moreover
, they bring entertainment high with
people
’s life.
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