You are a student living in university accommodation. The heating has not worked for some time. Write a letter to the management. In your letter Explain why you complain; Describe the problems Tell what you want them to do

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the heating in the student dormitory. As you know, the weather is getting extremely cold

this

winter.

However

, the heating has not worked properly for one month. The room temperature is only 10 degrees

celsus

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celsius

Celsus

. I got a cold and fever,

and

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had to rest in bed for one week and missed several classes. I contacted the maintenance office two weeks ago.

A staff

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came by and checked the heaters. He replaced some vents and

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guaranteed

guranteed

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guaranteed

that the heating problem had been fixed. It worked at

first

however

, the heater stopped working after two days. I am requesting the management department to solve the problem of heating as soon as possible.

This

issue led to sickness and influenced my course work. If the heating could not be fixed,

then

I will ask to change to another room with proper heaters. Yours sincerely, Ada

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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You are a student living in university accommodation. The heating has not worked for some time. Write a letter to the management. In your letter Explain why you complain; Describe the problems Tell what you want them to do

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Fraud has increased tremendously in the society. what are the reasons for this and how can the menace be curtailed?

The best way to make road transport safe is to require drivers to take a driving test every year. How much do you agree or disagree?

The proportion of older people is increasing, what problems will this cause and what solutions can be suggested?

Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?