You are a student living in university accommodation. The heating has not worked for some time. Write a letter to the management. In your letter Explain why you complain; Describe the problems Tell what you want them to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to complain about the heating in the student dormitory. As you know, the weather is getting extremely cold
this
winter.
However
, the heating has not worked properly for one month. The room temperature is only 10 degrees
celsus
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. I got a cold and fever,
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had to rest in bed for one week and missed several classes. I contacted the maintenance office two weeks ago.
A staff
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came by and checked the heaters. He replaced some vents and
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guaranteed
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guaranteed
that the heating problem had been fixed. It worked at
first
,
however
, the heater stopped working after two days. I am requesting the management department to solve the problem of heating as soon as possible.
This
issue led to sickness and influenced my course work. If the heating could not be fixed,
then
I will ask to change to another room with proper heaters. Yours sincerely, Ada
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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