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You have been working for a company for more than a few years and have decided to leave the company. Write a letter to your company manager saying that you want to leave the company. In your letter explain: what you have learned while working for the company whether you have enjoyed working for the company what are your reasons for leaving the company Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing great in your life. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am deciding to leave the company from next month as I moving back to my hometown.
Firstly
, I would like to express my feelings about the workplace and my colleagues as I have enjoyed being a part of
this
 company. I have learned a lot of things
for instance
 discipline,
time
 management and dealing with tough tasks. These learning lessons make me a good person
as well as
 enhance my ability to work in an efficient way. All the folks I am working with, are so helpful and knowledgeable. We have a great
time
 working together.
Moreover
, I have a good relationship with all of them we had a great
time
 at work had fun enjoying our break
time
 and
sharing
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 our lunch with each other.
Furthermore
, the reason why I am leaving work is my mother is not well as she was admitted to the hospital. She is in serious condition and my father told me to come back to my home town so it will be a great help to him to manage all the things there. He said that I should try to find a job in my hometown and start living with them. So I have decided to move back to my place with my family
due to
 the reason I have to quit my job. I hope you will understand my decision. I am looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully Daman
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that paragraphs focus on a single idea to enhance clarity.
task achievement
Include more specific details about your contributions to the company to fully address the task.
task achievement
The letter maintains a respectful and formal tone throughout, appropriate for a letter to a manager.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are well-structured and polite.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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