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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
Professionals especially doctors and engineers play a vital role in
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 progress and they are a huge asset to a nation. There is a controversy going on regarding
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their working rights, where a number of people believe, they are bound to do
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a career
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 only in that homey where they did their practice while some oppose
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that and say that they can work anywhere as they desire. I will shed light on both views and
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will give my take on
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To begin
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 of their state.
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 their workplace can bring numerous advantages
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to not only
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 local population
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 government sector. It will bring
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innovation and modern techniques to a particular
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 and will help the government to maintain
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. The local natives will
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abroad to get a task there will
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 which cannot
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fulfill
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 by anyone. In
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 the country will have simply wasted its training on a particular person. Now, I believe those who oppose to conditions of doing
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 a valid reason for that. owing to the fact that
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, under these terms they may not get an international experience and working environment.
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, If there are not simply
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opportunities
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of opportunities
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 to get
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 desired career how will they be able to flourish and survive under that
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 By discussing both
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views in detail, I personally believe,
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that specialist
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specialist
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specialists
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 must have the right to do their job anywhere in
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 they wish to. As it has more benefits in long term for both the professionals and
nation
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 growth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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