The sale and use of hard drugs are prohibited in many countries, but tobacco and alcohol are sold and consumed Governments should apply laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

These days, it is a controversial topic that

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cocaine, amphetamine, and heroin are banned from sale and use in various nations, why

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cigarettes and alcoholic drinks widely sold and commonly used by people?

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to restrict the sale and use of all types of disastrous narcotics, even these two things, I think that they should categorise them into soft and hard narcotics, and should apply different laws. In

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essay, the reason to support my disagreement with

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view will be elaborated. The first reason that the government should impose different regulations to prohibit hard and soft drugs is the level of damage to societies and individuals. Soft narcotics

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as cannabis, tobacco, and whisky are able to be legally sold and used by adults who are mature enough to know the consequences when they take these things for

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purposes.

However

, the government should implement strict legislation and punishments to control children

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under 18 years old because they are not mature and do not have responsibility enough to use them.

Furthermore

, they should be educated on the pros and cons of drugs to decide later when they are over 18 years old.

Secondly

, the alcohol and tobacco industries play a crucial role in driving the economy of the nation as the authority receives a huge amount of money by collecting taxes from these industries, which are considered the main financial

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of the nation.

For example

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the report from

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, in 2021, the income from taxes on beer, whisky, and a cigarette accounted for 30 per cent of the total income of Thailand.

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, cannabis legalization could promote tourism sectors resulting in generating enormous finance for Thailand in 2022. In conclusion,

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essay discussed why the authorities should not prohibit soft

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because it has the potential to relax people from stress, and can generate a tremendous budget for the countries. In my opinion, they should apply different laws and regulations to control these

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