Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that the fund for education should invest in advanced computers, while others assume that the fund should invest more in teachers. I strongly believe that investing in teachers is the best way for spending a vast of
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. On the one hand, it is necessary for spending more
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on computers because students prefer to study in front of the digital screen than offline, especially in
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pandemic era.
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phenomenon is started commonly in
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growth of technology. To take an example, a lot of children are able to obtain information via the internet in a short time.
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, some countries have spent tons of
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for getting the newest
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at their school.
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, the parents who are born in the 20th century commonly support
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. Even though many people invest in computers, other groups keep investing their
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in teachers. They believe that there are some aspects which cannot replace by the
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is about attitude,
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aspect is not able to be changed by the
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, and we know that well-behaved is really needed by the learner for their future and it cannot be taught by technology.
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, learning-method by the
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is usually monotone and has limitations.
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affects learning progress and sometimes makes the learner feels bored.
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, they are not able to comprehend the subject as well as the process
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done by the teacher. To sum up,
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agree with the
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statement, even though the
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statement has benefits for the student. Attitude is not the only aspect that cannot be changed by technology, but
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learning-method. These aspects make me prefer to stand with the
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argument.

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