In many parts of the world, girls and boys are educated together in co- education or mixed schools. Some people think that girls and boys benefit from being educated separately in single-sex schools. To what extent do you agree with this view?

In most countries,
boys
and
girls
study in one class. Some
people
believe that If they
are educated
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in separately
schools
, It will be useful for their quality of education. I completely disagree with
this
opinion. There are some reasons for
this
.
Firstly
, in the world, most
children
are educated in mixed
schools
.
This
is very important for two genders, especially for
boys
because If they study with
girls
in a room, they will learn more useful knowledge than alone. Most
boys
are usually lazy and they do not spend much time learning something.
However
,
girls
can teach all themes to everybody easier. For
this
, the main reason is that they are hardworking and they never think about other activities
such
as different games or entertainment.
Furthermore
,
girls
should compete with
boys
on different themes and organize debates after lessons.
Therefore
, in my opinion,
children
need to educate in mixed
schools
,
Secondly
, if
boys
are taught with
girls
in mixed
schools
, they may help them in difficult situations.
For example
, in some modern countries,
children
need to clean classrooms after lessons and
boys
can help to clean the room. In Japan, even the government support
this
kind of situation and school directors organized daily tables for
boys
to help
girls
to clean the classroom.
However
, some
people
think that pupils need to study at separate
schools
. Especially in Arabian countries, most
people
prefer to educate their
children
there but
this
is related to their religion. We should respect their decision. In conclusion,
boys
and
girls
need to be educated in one class at one school. They can take much motivation from each other.
Moreover
, we should respect all
people
's decisions because every person has their own decision and outlook.
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