Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

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are known as troublemakers in society. Like many

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, I

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have experienced rapid physical and emotional developments due to hormonal changes. These hormones make teens feel invincible and cause them to take higher risks and danger. Government regulations

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are used during a time of war or in more recent times to control a pandemic. In my opinion, imposing a

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to control

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is demeaning and counterproductive to the growth of the future generation. Humans, adults and

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alike have the right to live a free

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. Imposing

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type of regulation without a lawful reason is eliminate the freedom for teens to experience

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. I have experienced

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during pandemics. It was an unpleasant and stressful experience.

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, the

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qualities

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as helping each other, identifying threats, and individual confidence are diminished. I believe imposing a

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will create a future generation who are unable to react to complex

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situations.

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, the Teenage period is the best age to recognize themselves as independent human. Relying on adults makes them feel dependent. In fact, young people always find a way to gain their freedom and independence.

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may lead to more opportunities for bad actors to influence or bring harm to these young adults.

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, the unavailability of family members to accompany, them may lead them right into the hands of people with bad intentions.

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establishes these regulations are ineffective. To conclude, it is impractical to impose a

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during nighttime to limit

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’ activities due to the above reasons.

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, increasing the awareness, and education among

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regarding dangers is the better way to keep

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safe and maintain peace in society.

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