You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to enquire about the English literature course offered by your prestigious institution for foreign students. Perhaps, I had already finished my bachelor's in English and

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, I want to

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enhance my knowledge of the language. I wanted to request detailed information about the course. I am specifically looking for the Advanced Studies program which is going to start

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December.

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, I want to apply for a hostel room as I am an international student and had never been to England. It would reduce the hassle of finding a place to stay, beforehand.

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, I would prefer shared accommodation with an Asian because most of our culture is the same and it would be economical. I must inform you that I am allergic to gluten, could you please confirm for me if my special diet requests can be met by the hostel canteen? and if not, whether I will be allowed access to a kitchen so that I can prepare my own food? I look forward to your reply and would really appreciate your guidance, Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

msrubinagillMon Aug 08 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

188 words

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You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter ask about the school say what kind of accommodation you want mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

The primary purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computers, software, videos, and DVDs. To what extent you agree or disagree.

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