Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think a role of a parent should be in their child education.

Some youngsters get little

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from their

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as regards their academic performance at

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, whereas some

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are pressurized a lot

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their eager

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which could influence those

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children's

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negatively. I believe that reason why

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force their kids to perform better at

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is for them to have a great

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in the

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. The following essay would expatiate on the reason for

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to pressure their

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and

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their responsibilities

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their

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with, one of the reasons why both fathers and mothers force their

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to have

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good grades at

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is because they are building up their

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career

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in the

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good grades at

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due to their parent's influence, they would pass out with an excellent result or the best overall student in their

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gives them higher chances of getting employed

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one of the best company in the world.

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,

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nowadays put pressure on their

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to show off

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the most intelligent student among other co-

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could lead to

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impact

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as jealousy among students,

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in terms of other

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parents

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it gives them the impression that other people in the society would respect them more. To exemplify,

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research conducted on

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in Nigeria year 2018, shows that 80% of

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their

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force them

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were all successful in their

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career

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.

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, some of the responsibilities of

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in their

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's

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are to assist and motivate them in their homework and

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guide

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them to choose a better

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.

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assisting their

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with their

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would let them know how intelligent they are.

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allows the

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to know if they need extra help with their

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education

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performance and

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make

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them confide in them pertaining

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them to choose a better course in the university.

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result

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them a good and

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job in the

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, thereby reducing levels of dependency on their

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later in life.

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, a lot of

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guide

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their

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to choose

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health related

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courses because it has a lot of job opportunities in the world. In conclusion, why some

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pressure their youngsters on their academic performance

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because of them having

a great job opportunities

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in the

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and

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most

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play some significant roles for their

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to excel in

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as assisting

in

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their homework and

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guide

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them to the right

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pathway.