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increasing number of people are choosing cosmetology surgery to improve their appearance. What are the reasons? Do you think is it a positive or negative development?

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In the present world,
cosmetology
surgery
 become more and more popular. There are several reasons
people
 decided to do cosmetic
surgery
. I think
cosmetology
surgery
 has both positive and negative outcomes. I will be discussed
further
 in the below paragraphs. The positive side of
cosmetology
,
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 is as we see that society has given more value to good-looking
people
.
For instance
, most
people
 that appear on television and in the movies are considered handsome and beautiful.
Also
, social media product presenters, most of them appeared to be almost perfect appearances. Confidence is the primary reason
people
 choose
plastic
surgery
. It is well known that
cosmetology
surgery
 help enhances a patient's lifestyle. In Asia, K-POP star has become role model to many young adults. It is very well known that all of those singers have been through
plastic
surgery
.
Therefore
, the
cosmetology
surgery
 beauty business has been rising every year and the cost become more and more affordable as well as clinics alternative. On the negative side,
plastic
surgery
 is not recommended for everyone, especially, adolescents, their bodies still need to completely grow.
Also
, any kind of
surgery
 can take some time to recover. The patient could very experience some massive pain. and beauty
surgery
 can be very expensive so not everyone can do To conclude, as we see
plastic
surgery
 given more positives than negatives. I still think it is important for
people
 who are interested in
cometology
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surgery
 to be educated about both positive and negative impacts before they make a decision. Even
plastic
surgery
 given more positives than negatives.
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