Language teachers should concentrate on giving feedback to students when they do good work, rather than on criticising bad work. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Professors play a vital role in shaping
students
' life. It is commonly said that teachers who teach languages should encourage
students
by providing positive feedback when they give their best rather than criticising rough
work
.
This
essay will suggest why there are numerous reasons to support
this
statement and
also
state some relevant examples
First
of all, If tutors address
students
positively for their good
work
now and
then
, it would help them to build confidence in their mind and pushes them to give their best in the future.
For example
, a recent survey from the University of Cambridge stated that if
students
are provided with better results when they do their best , it will increase their chances of success in future
additionally
it would
also
help them lead a better life.
Secondly
, a huge amount of
students
are continuously suffering from mental diseases like stress, depression and much more. So not insulting and humiliating them for negative
work
, would help today's generation to be completely stress-free.
For instance
, as per a report recently in India over 70 % of youth who are studying in either school or college are in a state of fear that if they were not able to score high or give their best, they will be insulted in front of the whole class.
This
often leads to suicide and even the murder of teachers. I had
also
suffered a lot for my
work
in high school as I was often scolded but thanks to my mother and father who helped me throughout my journey. In conclusion, looking at the advantages of giving importance to good
work
over bad
work
make a better environment for learners to be stress-free and positive for the coming exams.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • concentrate on
  • positive feedback
  • good work
  • criticising
  • bad work
  • motivate
  • boost confidence
  • discourage
  • demotivate
  • identify strengths
  • build on
  • overwhelming
  • hinder
  • progress
  • balance
  • effective teaching
  • encourage
  • take risks
  • think creatively
  • fear of failure
  • hesitation
  • positive learning environment
  • demoralize
  • negative atmosphere
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