Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting the usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Although

in recent days there is

cutting edge

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technology

in medical fields, some

people

prefer

alternative

treatments

rather than go to the traditional doctor without thinking of the consequence of

treatments

for cancer, pandemics or health system overburdened. In my opinion,

this

will be negative for society. The ease with which

people

have access to

alternative

medicine

is dangerous as there are no studies to give a clear result of the effectiveness of these, so that, when the population choose

this

type of treatment there is not

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an improvement in an illness.

Furthermore

, it can be said a balance between

technology

and normal doctor have improved life expectancy,

on the contrary

, the

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rate of either acupuncture or homoeopathy

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where

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is no proof of the real result.

For instance

, there are studies to show that

alternative

medicine

appeal more to the placebo effect if

people

try to

use

more

this

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medicine

, the world will have a more sick population. The main consequence of

this

is in the success rate of

treatments

will increase and in illnesses like cancer is necessary to

use

traditional

medicine

with a mixture of

technology

as

the

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science tests the products before to

use

in the population showing objective results.

In addition

,

although

alternative

treatments

usually do not

use

pharmaceutical chemicals,

this

is necessary to control pandemics and does not overburden like

recently

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show coronavirus times.

For example

,

Chile

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most of the

people

that died were who do not

got

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the vaccination and

people

who survived were vaccinated. In conclusion, for

people

is indispensable to go to the traditional doctor as is more reliable than

alternative

medicine

so that

medicine

and

technology

could show real figures of success.