Some people believe that money is more important than free time for a good quality of life. Others say the opposite is true. Discuss both views. What is more important in your opinion? Give relevant examples.
There is a popular belief
in
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to
which
several people adhere Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
that discusses [a]the supremacy of Change preposition
apply
money
over other aspects that symbolizes contentment. From my perspective, each and every human being should learn the importance of balancing these two aspects in life
. This
essay will consider both views as well as supporting reasons on how balancing these two aspects
can improve Add the comma(s)
, as well as supporting reasons on how balancing these two aspects,
one
's welfare.
Money
is indeed a crucial factor that contributes to an individual's fulfillment
, Change the spelling
fulfilment
however
spending quality Add a comma
,however
time
in life
through various activities are
[b]often overlooked by not only those proponents who attach t[c][d]Correct subject-verb agreement
is
heir
happiness with Correct your spelling
their
money
. Cash is an essential asset used to trade for food, water, rent, house, furniture, education, entertainment, etc. Moreover
, the more valued one
's properties are, the more they feel empowered. Thus
, this
makes laborers
slavishly worship the fortune's tormenting potency that it seemingly introduces. Change the spelling
labourers
In addition
, there is a
prevalent disbelief existing within mortals stating that if Remove the article
apply
one
possesses great
value of Add an article
the great
money
, they shall possess any other ordinary objects. All of these add to the fact that they often neglect spending
actual quality Change the verb form
to spend
time
performing acts which they would rather enjoy.
However
, from a modern standpoint, to achieve the utmost satisfaction in life
, one
must be financially stable, not only must one
be capable of self-nourishment but also
have the ability of
provision. Having an adequate budget will certainly provide Change preposition
to
one
with basic needs in life
. Regardless of how wealth can supply our desiderata, experience is what truly forms gratification. In other words
, genuine happiness derives from the way we allocate free time
in order to achieve self-actualization. For instance
, we may handle those available occasions with loved ones or implement amusing exercises.
In conclusion, to obtain self-realization and pleasure, one
must balance between
wealth and the events Change preposition
apply
in
their Change preposition
of
time
being
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apply
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