An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online .

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number of people and firms with the advent of technology

are

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presently purchasing what they desire through the internet.

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first

suggest that

,

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saving

of

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time

is the primary benefit for both

individuals

and organizations while loss of

money

is the main drawback. A meaningful conclusion shall be made afterwards.

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, saving

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time

is one of the enormous reasons

individuals

and firms purchase online.

This

is because, with

this

mode of buying, people do not have to go in search of the item physically, moving from one shop to the other but with just a click of a button, items are displaced and the individual request

for

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what they want , pay and sit comfortably for it to be delivered making it very convenient for them since that

time

could be used for other things.

Furthermore

, it reduces the cost as companies and

individuals

save

money

because the goods are delivered to their doorstep unlike where they go to buy and

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to transport themselves.

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, in a recent survey conducted by the ministry of trade and industry, it was revealed that those who engage in internet buying save nearly half of their

money

due to free transportation.

Thus

, purchasing online will go a long way to

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time

and cost for all who venture into it. Despite the convenience and reduction in cost, procuring online can not go without a challenge and one of them is loss of

money

. A key factor to

this

is that there are a lot of fraudsters who will just showcase something online and after people place

order

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and make payment, they close their site causing them to

loss

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their monies. More so, there can be a change of items where what exactly was requested

for

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will not be delivered and the person or organization have to take it as it is.

For instance

, the managing director of GHACEM in an interview revealed that the company has lost 1 billion dollars to fraudsters when they wanted to buy a new

cement making

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machine .

Thus

, huge sums of monies can go waste in

this

kind of business. In conclusion,

individuals

can save

time

and not incur so much when they buy online but they should have

it

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in mind that they can

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loose

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their monies and get their items changed upon delivery.