Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Making
decisions
is an important feature of human behaviour. Some Use synonyms
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think that if Use synonyms
children
decide about their routine tasks by themselves, they probably become like people who are just concerned about their own needs. Use synonyms
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decisions
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matters
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individuals
in society, but families have an essential role in developing the Use synonyms
power
of choice of their Use synonyms
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by teaching them to make Use synonyms
decisions
in other types of Use synonyms
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in addition
to daily routines.
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children
always have a high level of talent and the Use synonyms
power
of learning. Indeed, doing repetitive activities is registered in their long-term memories and could become a part of their behaviours. Making choices is a sample of behaviours that Use synonyms
children
learn in their repetitive daily activities. Now, if making choices are related to their inner needs, Use synonyms
such
as food, clothes, and entertainment, they learn to pay attention more to everyday Linking Words
matters
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In other words
, by allowing Linking Words
children
to make Use synonyms
decisions
about routine tasks, the importance of their own wishes is bolded for them, and it makes them self-centred Use synonyms
individuals
who just think about their own needs. Use synonyms
For instance
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children
who just decide about their food or entertainment cannot easily realize others’ needs and just focus on their own wishes.
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On the other hand
, allowing Linking Words
children
to make choices, even about their own needs, promote their Use synonyms
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of decision making. Use synonyms
In other words
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children
who have experience in deciding about their daily Use synonyms
matters
have better Use synonyms
power
of decision making in comparison with those who choose their routine tasks from their own parents. Indeed, those who have a chance to make Use synonyms
decisions
can be more independent people in society about their choice on different types of topics. Use synonyms
For example
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children
who choose the colour of their clothes by themselves can easily decide about the colour of their cars or colours for the redecoration of their home in the future.
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however
, giving chance to Linking Words
children
to make a decision about their daily programs teach Use synonyms
individuals
who are self-willed and jus have concerned about their own needs, Use synonyms
children
learn to be independent about their choice in society. Of course, families should teach their Use synonyms
children
how to tackle every type of matter and don’t limit their Use synonyms
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to decide only about daily Use synonyms
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