Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Technology
has improved a lot of things today especially
in the section of communication. Due to Add the comma(s)
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this
development, the path of interaction among the
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people
has changed nowadays. However
, there can be many reasons which affected various kinds of relationships
people
make. From my Correct your spelling
perspective
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this
has many advantages with some negative impacts and this
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causes
of these impacts.
It can't be denied that Fix the agreement mistake
cause
technology
has made our life more
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relationships
than before. Moreover
, it has reduced the distance
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of
a native person and a foreigner. Change preposition
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In addition
, a few decades ago, people
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distance
from them but now, everything has been
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people
can connect with their family via video call
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calls
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, emails, Fix the agreement mistake
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chatting
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and chatting
everyday
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However
, everything has merits with some demerits too. In this
case, technology
has some negative impacts too on the relationships
people
make. Although
,
it has decreased the Remove the comma
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distance
between the family members who are far from them, unfortunately, it has increased the distance
who are living together because today people
are more busy
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Furthermore
, they choose to give their time on
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For instance
, people
are busy to show
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in
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on
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or any other social Change the capitalization
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sites
by uploading photos or videos with their family but in Fix the agreement mistake
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real
, the emotion is completely fake which is very unfortunate.
In conclusion, Replace the word
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people
should obviously enjoy the positive results of technology
but with the good maintenance of their relationships
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