Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
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especially
in the section of communication. Due to Add the comma(s)
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people
has changed nowadays. Use synonyms
However
, there can be many reasons which affected various kinds of Linking Words
relationships
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people
make. From my Use synonyms
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has many advantages with some negative impacts and Linking Words
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causes
of these impacts.
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cause
technology
has made our life Use synonyms
more
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relationships
than before. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it has reduced the Linking Words
distance
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between
the relationship Change preposition
in
of
a native person and a foreigner. Change preposition
between
In addition
, a few decades ago, Linking Words
people
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for
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ones
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in
a huge Change preposition
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distance
from them but now, everything has Use synonyms
been
changed. Now, Unnecessary verb
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people
can connect with their family via video Use synonyms
call
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calls
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calls
chatting
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and chatting
everyday
.
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However
, everything has merits with some demerits too. In Linking Words
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case, Linking Words
technology
has some negative impacts too on the Use synonyms
relationships
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people
make. Use synonyms
Although
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,
it has decreased the Remove the comma
apply
distance
between the family members who are far from them, unfortunately, it has increased the Use synonyms
distance
who are living together because today Use synonyms
people
are Use synonyms
more busy
with their phones for chatting with their friends, Replace the words
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Furthermore
, they choose to give their time Linking Words
on
virtual things rather than giving time to their close ones. Change preposition
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For instance
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people
are busy Use synonyms
to show
off Change the verb form
showing
in
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on
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sites
by uploading photos or videos with their family but in Fix the agreement mistake
site
real
, the emotion is completely fake which is very unfortunate.
In conclusion, Replace the word
reality
people
should obviously enjoy the positive results of Use synonyms
technology
but with the good maintenance of their Use synonyms
relationships
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