Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Technology

has improved a lot of things today

especially

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in the section of communication. Due to

this

development, the path of interaction among

the

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people

has changed nowadays.

However

, there can be many reasons which affected various kinds of

relationships

people

make. From my

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prospective

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,

this

has many advantages with some negative impacts and

this

essay will discuss

the

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every possible

causes

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cause

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of these impacts. It can't be denied that

technology

has made our life

more

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easier especially to improve

relationships

than before.

Moreover

, it has reduced the

distance

between

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the relationship

of

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between

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a native person and a foreigner.

In addition

, a few decades ago,

people

had to write letters

for

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their special

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ones

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one

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who

were

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in

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a huge

distance

from them but now, everything has

been

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changed. Now,

people

can connect with their family via video

call

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, phone

call

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, emails,

chatting

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and chatting

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everyday

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.

However

, everything has merits with some demerits too. In

this

case,

technology

has some negative impacts too on the

relationships

people

make.

Although

,

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it has decreased the

distance

between the family members who are far from them, unfortunately, it has increased the

distance

who are living together because today

people

are

more busy

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with their phones for chatting with their friends,

you

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tubing and so on.

Furthermore

, they choose to give their time

on

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virtual things rather than giving time to their close ones.

For instance

,

people

are busy

to show

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off

in

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facebook

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or any other social

sites

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site

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by uploading photos or videos with their family but in

real

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, the emotion is completely fake which is very unfortunate. In conclusion,

people

should obviously enjoy the positive results of

technology

but with the good maintenance of their

relationships