The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

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modern era, technological advancement has not even spared the shopping arena. Various online shopping websites have been launched to purchase goods, ultimately closing physical shops. I agree with

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statement as the webshops are providing the

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with numerous offers which are beneficial for a consumer. At the outset, e-commerce websites are convenient for the

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to shop. These days everyone has smartphones, which makes it easy for everyone to shop online. In fact, it saves a lot of

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' time by not standing in long queues, as a person can place an order while sitting at any place.

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, the long supermarket queues are commonly seen, so many

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prefer not to go there as it takes their valuable time.

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are preferring online shopping nowadays as it saves their precious time by ordering from these applications.

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led to high demand for

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apps and the closing of physical stores.

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, e-commerce websites are offering tons of offers on daily basis to allure

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which physical stores never do. That's why

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get attracted to these offers and prefer to do shopping online.

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, the Myntra app is used to do EORS for all of its

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and provides them with many options to buy. On top of

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, e-com shops have many good policies to retain their

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as 30 days return or exchange policy and the company will not ask a single question from you before making a return.

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,

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feel so secure as there is no one watching what they are doing in their online shopping

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the activity of users is being tracked it's not recognizable to the

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.

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makes the

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happy and does more shopping online. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that webshops are providing everything which a

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wants. So, all commerce

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preferably going towards these shops

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of the physical store to avoid the hassle.