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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms in other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed by some experts that there exist brilliant life
forms
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 on other
planets
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 and should be reached by messaging. While others are of a contrary view owing to the danger involved. In my opinion, I agree that
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 intelligent
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 be contacted by messaging as
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 will reveal the true nature of
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 beings and open
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 areas of
research
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.
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, it has been proven beyond any iota of doubt that there are other
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 apart from the earth. Scientists and astronauts have discovered that there exists life on planet Mars and have started exploring
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 to know more about
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. If there exist intelligent
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 on other
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, it is worth messaging others to unravel the true nature of these beings for a better understanding of what they truly represent.
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, Sending messages to these
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 will open
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 areas of
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 and knowledge expansion,
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 unravelling some things that hitherto were unknown to us.
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, some believe that there are dangers associated with messaging a being whose form and identity are unknown,
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 as emissions of harmful radiation from the other
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, destruction of the earth's crust, increase in global warming and eventually leading to the global pandemic.
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, most disease outbreaks have resulted from
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 on things unknown to man. The current global pandemic of COVID-29 has been traced to
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 on bats. In conclusion, there exist a lot of benefits in contacting intelligent
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 on the other
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 as the revelation of the true nature of these beings and expansion of
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 areas even though there are dangers associated with
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • extraterrestrial
  • investigate
  • interstellar
  • speculate
  • communication
  • primitive
  • potential
  • collaboration
  • unlock
  • unprecedented
  • advancement
  • caution
  • consequences
  • hostile
  • unknowingly
  • civilization
  • disrupt
  • evolution
  • preserve
  • ponder
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