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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only langusge to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

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In recent times, learning
English
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 has been increasing for years. The main advantage of
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 trend is that it helps to improve the economy and the main drawback is that it can affect native languages. Speaking in
English
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 has several merits. On the one hand, the
English
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language
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 has a prominent changed all over the world while it
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 a crucial role in its society, there are common benefits, which contribute to us, speaking a different
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 can be an encounter with each other easily and it will improve the tourism industry and stimulate job opportunities, which leads to economic growth in the country, whereas people could enhance their income.
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, research shows, that in Sri Lanka's GDP, 70% of income comes from the tourism industry.
English
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 is the main subject in schools .Which requires day-to-day life,
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 as private sector workers, highest studies, and overseas businesses.
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, the main disadvantage of
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 phenomenon is that people are interested in learning the
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language
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, it might affect the native
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 and culture whereas the native
language
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 has an integral part of the future and It represents the country's identity. If it continues it would put an end to our
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 existence.
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, research shows, in Malaysia, that 80% of people speak only
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 and Could not speak their native
language
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. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, Speaking another
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 has benefit
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 of one
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. It
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 plays a vital unit in its society. It can enforce the right method and mitigate the effect.
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