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In some countries, many people choose to educate children at home by themselves instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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In
this
 modern era, many parts of the world people teach their
children
 by themself, they do not send them to
school
. In
this
 essay, I would explain the benefits and the drawbacks of
this
 problem in the upcoming paragraphs. In the past, people sent their
children
 to
school
 and
children
 learn many
subjects
 over there but nowadays
parents
 do not send their
children
 to
school
 and they learn their
children
 by themselves.
Moreover
 ,
This
 is not beneficial for
children
's growth because their
parents
 teach only the liking
subjects
 they can not be taught other
subjects
 which can be hard on them .
In addition
, many
parents
 do not know about all
subjects
 deeply so they emphasise only basic wisdom so their
children
 would be faced many problems in their future. Apart from
this
 , if
parents
 send their pupils into the
school
 so they can learn many extra curriculum activities as well.
On the other hand
 side , people can teach their child many outside
subjects
 which one not included in the
school
also
 if
parents
 have enough education in their respective field so they can easily teach their child that skills.
For example
, if
parents
 have knowledge about architecture so they teach them painting and drawing easily. In conclusion , I have a concern about
children
's future because if all
parents
 teach their child by themselves so the traditional way of teaching may be disappeared and students do not envoke many
subjects
 in their study so yes
this
 problem has more drawbacks .
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