Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans faced in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions
In fact, in one or two centuries around the world, it has become an extremely controversial issue that global warming is getting worse.
This
must be stopped and a proper solution should be applied. Therefore
, for the purpose of this
essay, I shall confine the discussion to some causes of global warming and some possible solutions in order to enhance people's lives.
Accordingly
, a great way to cause this
problem would be deforestation and agriculture. More precisely, Plants are the main source of oxygen. They take in carbon dioxide and release oxygen thereby maintaining the environment. In addition
, farming activities produce CO2 and methane gases. To illustrate, the greenhouses that have been applied lately in Chain hence
resulted in various gaseous emissions. Furthermore
, the use of vehicles and industrial development are other reasons. In other words
, Vehicles burn fossil fuels which emit a large amount of carbon dioxide and other toxins into the atmosphere resulting in a temperature increase.
Solving this
problem is not easy. However
, the key to reducing these problems seems to lie in cleaning up your environment. For more explanation, Humans, animals and plants all suffer from land and water contaminated by improperly discarded garbage. For example
, Sultan Qaboos University reported that every year, people throw out 2 billion tons of trash. Moreover
, Throw away less food. To explain, use what you buy and compost any leftovers. For instance
, Cutting your food waste can reduce your carbon footprint by up to 300 kilograms of CO2e per year.
In conclusion, however
, it is not doubtful that global warming has a great deal of problems. These possible solutions, of course, are clear. So if people follow the suggested options which are mentioned above, they will bring quality to their lives.Submitted by shareifaalsiyabi on
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task response
Your introduction sets the stage by mentioning the contentious issue of global warming, but the phrasing could be clearer. Consider refining for conciseness and clarity.
coherence cohesion
While your conclusion is present and encapsulates the main points well, try to make it slightly more expansive to summarize the key arguments of the essay.
task achievement
Add more specific examples and statistics to further back up your main points, especially when discussing solutions to global warming.
task response
The essay addresses the prompt well by discussing both the problems associated with global warming and possible solutions.
coherence cohesion
The organization of the essay is strong, with clear separations between the cause and solution sections.
coherence cohesion
Good use of transitional phrases such as "In other words" and "For example" help to guide the reader through your points.
Your opinion
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