The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is increasingly important for everyone to take responsibility to protect our
planet
earth.
Although
a few think we should not be overly concerned about the environment, others think it is high time people should sacrifice all the comforts so there will be a better future for the
next
generations. In my perspective, I totally disagree with
this
statement because rather than sacrificing all the comforts, people could take more responsibility by themselves,
in addition
,
by
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educating others on how not to pollute our
planet
. Our
planet
is being polluted at an alarming rate and it
our
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responsibility to take necessary measures without delaying any
further
. Some suggest that people should sacrifice comfort levels to a certain extent so that we can expect a greener
planet
for the
next
generations.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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