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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today.

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Technology has grown enormously. People in society are much exposed to social community sites like Facebook and Twitter.
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, it suppresses the development of
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personal growth. It impacts growth in the form of social distance from family members,
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 society enhancements and distraction for students in their studies. There are many reasons why urban residents are unable to concentrate on their physical health. Primarily, the unavailability of sufficient recreational facilities plays a major role. A sudden boost in the global population, as found in a recent study, has compelled the governments to construct an increasing number of living apartments, thereby, resulting in the consumption of space previously allocated for relaxation.
Furthermore
, an increase in the cost of living has made people dwelling in cities work more than they used to in earlier times,
hence
, being left with no or limited time to involve themselves in some physical activities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Escapism
  • 2. Social gatherings
  • 3. Cultural heritage
  • 4. Traditions
  • 5. Social change
  • 6. Political expression
  • 7. Awareness
  • 8. Community
  • 9. Belonging
  • 10. Therapeutic benefits
  • 11. Mental health
  • 12. Emotional expression
  • 13. Cognitive performance
  • 14. Concentration
  • 15. Memory
  • 16. Productivity
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