Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, due to
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in technology globally, more and more adults work from home and,
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children are learning their courses from home,
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is because technology is cheaper and easily accessible. In my opinion, I think that it is a positive development because
students
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and employees save
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valuable time and money and,
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due to cheap
internet
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they can attend their lectures and
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online. I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs.
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with, there are many reasons why it is a positive development.
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and foremost, employees and
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can save their valuable time along with money which they spend
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the
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,
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is because they can submit their projects and reports on
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medium.
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, during
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pandemic whole world
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from
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virus and for that reason,
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attended their
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over the
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.
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, employees can submit their reports
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online, they do not need to go to
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and
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office for that.
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, nowadays
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internet
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the internet
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pack is much cheaper and easily used by billion of people.
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, "Jio Sim" in India gives a number of
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to their
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on net recharge
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very
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cheap price, which is easily affordable by people.
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, over the
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internet
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a number of free courses are available on different educational platforms with valid
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like "freecodecamp". To illustrate
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, online educational platforms are offers their
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to learn a lot of courses including practical and
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theoretical
theoritical
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theoretical
from home using laptops and phones, they do not need to attend offline classes. In conclusion, after considering all, I think that it is a positive development because individuals can save their money and time along with they do not need to attend offline classes and meetings.
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