Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, due to

enhancement

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in technology globally, more and more adults work from home and,

also

children are learning their courses from home,

this

is because technology is cheaper and easily accessible. In my opinion, I think that it is a positive development because

students

and employees save

their

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apply

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valuable time and money and,

also

due to cheap

internet

they can attend their lectures and

meeting

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online. I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why it is a positive development.

First

and foremost, employees and

students

can save their valuable time along with money which they spend

over

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on

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the

internet

,

this

is because they can submit their projects and reports on

online

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the online

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medium.

For example

, during

corona

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the corona

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pandemic whole world

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from

this

virus and for that reason,

students

are

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attended their

lecture

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lectures

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over the

internet

.

Also

, employees can submit their reports

on

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apply

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online, they do not need to go to

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the workplace

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and

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office for that.

Furthermore

, nowadays

internet

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the internet

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pack is much cheaper and easily used by billion of people.

For instance

, "Jio Sim" in India gives a number of

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an offer

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offer

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to their

customer's

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customers

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on net recharge

in

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at

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very

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cheap price, which is easily affordable by people.

Also

, over the

internet

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,internet

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a number of free courses are available on different educational platforms with valid

certificate

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certificates

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like "freecodecamp". To illustrate

this

, online educational platforms are offers their

students

to learn a lot of courses including practical and

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theoretical

theoritical

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theoretical

from home using laptops and phones, they do not need to attend offline classes. In conclusion, after considering all, I think that it is a positive development because individuals can save their money and time along with they do not need to attend offline classes and meetings.