It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to advanced in technology more and more
people
think that traditional cultures will be lost,
also
people
think that we cannot have these two things together. I strongly disagree with
this
statement and I think that due to the
internet
we can connect with and see many historical
places
,
also
we can
share
with each other about our traditions over the
internet
and, I will explain my reasons for it in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
with, there are many reasons why I disagree with
this
prompt.
First
and foremost, smartphones and social media have it made easy for us to
share
anything in public.
For example
, take my friend Anil, who currently lives in Mumbai and
this
Diwali he shared photos and videos about the "Diwali" celebration in his locality, and
as a result
, I learn a lot of things from these videos and photos about their
places
.
Secondly
, due to the
internet
, it is much easy for the pupil to
share
their traditional culture's photos and from that others know very effectively, which was not possible a century ago.
Furthermore
, now every house has a computer system, with the help of computers and phones we can read any articles that are related to tradition. Nowadays individuals
share
their historical and famous
places
about their country for that reason, other
people
easily got about
this
particular country tradition.
For example
, there are many websites and blogs where
people
are writing reviews about their trips to a particular location which make it easier for other individuals to visit
this
place in the future. In conclusion, after considering all, I strongly disagree with
this
statement.
However
, I think that due to advanced technology we connected with historical
places
easily and get a lot of information from the
internet
medium.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inevitable
  • advancement
  • globalization
  • dilutes
  • traditional cultures
  • social media
  • blending of cultures
  • preservation
  • platforms
  • adaptability
  • technological adaptations
  • uphold
  • consequence
  • integrate
  • cultural frameworks
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