It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, due to advanced in technology more and more

people

think that traditional cultures will be lost,

also

people

think that we cannot have these two things together. I strongly disagree with

this

statement and I think that due to the

internet

we can connect with and see many historical

places

also

we can

with each other about our traditions over the

internet

and, I will explain my reasons for it in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why I disagree with

this

prompt.

First

and foremost, smartphones and social media have it made easy for us to

anything in public.

For example

, take my friend Anil, who currently lives in Mumbai and

this

Diwali he shared photos and videos about the "Diwali" celebration in his locality, and

as a result

, I learn a lot of things from these videos and photos about their

places

Secondly

, due to the

internet

, it is much easy for the pupil to

their traditional culture's photos and from that others know very effectively, which was not possible a century ago.

Furthermore

, now every house has a computer system, with the help of computers and phones we can read any articles that are related to tradition. Nowadays individuals

their historical and famous

places

about their country for that reason, other

people

easily got about

this

particular country tradition.

For example

, there are many websites and blogs where

people

are writing reviews about their trips to a particular location which make it easier for other individuals to visit

this

place in the future. In conclusion, after considering all, I strongly disagree with

this

statement.

However

, I think that due to advanced technology we connected with historical

places

easily and get a lot of information from the

internet

medium.

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Topic Vocabulary:

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advancement
globalization
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traditional cultures
social media
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adaptability
technological adaptations
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