It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, due to advanced in technology more and more

people

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think that traditional cultures will be lost,

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people

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think that we cannot have these two things together. I strongly disagree with

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statement and I think that due to the

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we can connect with and see many historical

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we can

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with each other about our traditions over the

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and, I will explain my reasons for it in the upcoming paragraphs.

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with, there are many reasons why I disagree with

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and foremost, smartphones and social media have it made easy for us to

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anything in public.

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, take my friend Anil, who currently lives in Mumbai and

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Diwali he shared photos and videos about the "Diwali" celebration in his locality, and

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, I learn a lot of things from these videos and photos about their

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, due to the

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, it is much easy for the pupil to

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their traditional culture's photos and from that others know very effectively, which was not possible a century ago.

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, now every house has a computer system, with the help of computers and phones we can read any articles that are related to tradition. Nowadays individuals

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their historical and famous

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about their country for that reason, other

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easily got about

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particular country tradition.

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, there are many websites and blogs where

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are writing reviews about their trips to a particular location which make it easier for other individuals to visit

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place in the future. In conclusion, after considering all, I strongly disagree with

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statement.

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, I think that due to advanced technology we connected with historical

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easily and get a lot of information from the

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medium.

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