You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you have done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express some valuable feedback on the cookery
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that I did
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month at your renowned school.
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with, I would like to thank you and your team for tutoring students with so much patience.
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, I never faced any difficulty because your teaching methods are really helpful for me to easily understand.
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,
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makes me improve my creative thinking on how to add the ratio of the ingredients. I believe I will have a great opportunity in the future after learning a wide variety of cuisine in your school. Since the completion of my
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, I have been cooking every day and was searching for a job to use back my cooking skill. I am glad to inform you that I recently got an offer as permanent staff from a Fell Café to assist Chef.
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the
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was undoubtedly perfect, it mostly focused on teaching the preparation of main-
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meals. It would be great if you could add a complementary starter and a sweet dish-making
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to the original one. I hope my insights will be valuable. Warm Regards Sandar
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