You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter - Say how you feel about his performance - give details of your musical activities - explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear Alice, I hope you are doing well! I am a massive fan of yours. Lately, I have seen you at the musical concert in Auckland. You were terrific as usual. I have heard your many songs on Television. It was the
first
time to watch your show live. It was a great experience. Your performance was outstanding, and the chosen pieces are my favourite by chance. One of my friends accompanied me, and she listened to you for the
first
time and was completely mesmerized by your melodious voice. She
also
became your fan and listened to your songs all day. I am
also
learning music from a famous tutor in my area. According to him, I am good, but I know I need to improve a lot. I cannot sing emotional songs. So, I have a small request if you can help in enhancing these minor problems. It will help me in achieving greater heights in my career. I know you are always busy with your concerts and other activities. If you have some time, you can give me a zoom session once a week and can let guide me on my shortcomings. I'll be looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully Amanda
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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