Рeople today spend less and less time interacting with other people in their neighborhood and this has a negative impact on communities. what are the possible causes and solutions to this problem?

The human
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contact between people has become less than before, it is true and undeniable,
it
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that it
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leads to negative consequences and impacts on society, we should
to
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apply
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be more serious and consider causes and
seeking
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solutions to
this
problem To get more close for
the
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apply
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possible reasons, it is obvious that nowadays
public
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the public
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prefer
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prefers
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to stay home and spend the whole time on social media,
for example
,
instead
of visiting their
neighbors
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neighbours
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or relatives, they chat
each
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with each
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other by using any application.
However
this
might be considered an
interacting
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, it has not any human contact.
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instance
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many years ago people
live
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who live
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in the same
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neighbourhood
nieghborhood
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neighbourhood
used to know each other and practice social activities at weekends, in festivals
such
as Christmas and Easter they were gathering and
greeting
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each other, these scenes are disappeared
by
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over
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the
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time,
therefore
negative impacts
such
as the
sence
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sense
of joy and loyalty
is
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are
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less than before.
On the other hand
, governments should take serious steps to raise public awareness about the importance of
interacting
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interaction
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and
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communications
communictions
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communication
between us.
For example
, arranging social campaigns,
produce
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films and commercials talking about the danger of social media over-using, schools have a significant role to play on
this
issue,
for instance
, the
neighborhood's
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neighbourhood's
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schools arrange parents meeting on a weekly basis so they keep contact between them,
moreover
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the domestic governers for each
provience
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province
should encourage their citizens to practice social activities
for
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example, a
sport
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competition in
same
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the same
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neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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or between towns could be a chance to enhance communications In conclusion, the communication between people in
same
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the same
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neighborhood
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neighbourhood
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is a serious problem we must act quickly to solve by
consider
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considering
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the possible causes and
take
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taking
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true measures.
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