Some people believe that the government should not spend money on international aid when they have their disadvantaged people (the homeless and unemployed). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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other Use synonyms
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, there have been various controversial debates on whether or not governments should engage in humanitarian work for other Use synonyms
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domestic issues. Due to the harm done to the economy and side effects seen Use synonyms
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of these activities, I support the mentioned viewpoint which would be subjected to objective discussion during the course of Use synonyms
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essay.
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off, it is true that providing international Linking Words
aid
requires a lot of resources, including human labour and financial resources, which could Use synonyms
result
in a lack of funding from the government. Use synonyms
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, numerous domestic issues like homelessness and unemployment would worsen, even though these subsidies should have been used to address them because they have a significant negative impact on the homeland. Meanwhile, the development of new companies and the construction of housing for the homeless could both benefit society by creating additional jobs and improving the general welfare. Use synonyms
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, the economy would create a surplus, which would eventually provide more Use synonyms
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to the desperate countries.
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, authorities might encounter upheaval in other Linking Words
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by paying excessive attention to international affairs. Many governments intentionally or inadvertently sow uncertainty by getting excessively involved in local political matters of the receiving countries. Particularly, many private firms attempt to intervene with local governments while providing support, strengthening their power to benefit themselves. Use synonyms
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, these governments’ integrity would be compromised, which might give rise to several unlawful behaviours. Use synonyms
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, poorer Linking Words
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are more prone to lose their internal motivation, which is crucial for national development, when they excessively rely on foreign influences. Use synonyms
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, where people stop taking the initiative to solve local problems in favour of waiting for outside assistance.
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nations
should focus more on domestic concerns rather than on international ones as the benefits are more apparent for both the giving and the receiving ends.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite