Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what you like about the uniform explain what you don’t you like about the uniform suggest how the uniform can be improved

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Dear Mr. Pink, I am writing
this
letter to express that my latest uniform is very elegant and I love it because it is in my favourite colour red, which looks amazing.
Further
, the shirt has a black bow which gives a professional touch and it fits
to
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me.
However
, sorry to say that there is only one thing about the dress that I dislike, the fabric of
this
outfit is too hard, which can cause skin rashes and
also
avoid wearing
such
clothes as we work in hot regions. So
this
is suitable only in Winter. I want to give you a suggestion that you can change
this
fabric with cotton, as cotton is very comfortable to wear and
also
it is softer than others. I'd be thankful for your compromise. Thanks in advance,
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Coherence and Cohesion
Consider using connectors between ideas, especially when expressing contrasting points (e.g. "However").
Task Achievement
Try to provide a more specific suggestion or rationale for changing the fabric. For instance, mention any specific benefits other than comfort.
Task Achievement
The letter maintains a polite and respectful tone throughout, suitable for a formal communication with a manager.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is structured in a logical manner, consistently focusing on one aspect of the uniform in each paragraph.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • introduced
  • appreciation
  • pleasing
  • professional image
  • elegant
  • sophistication
  • professionalism
  • high quality
  • appearance
  • comfort
  • modern
  • stylish
  • tailored
  • sleek lines
  • polished
  • discomfort
  • relaxed
  • adjustable
  • beneficial
  • aesthetics
  • commitment
  • valued
  • enhance
  • modifications
  • impression
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