The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant
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The map depicts an
island
before and after the development for tourist
being created to facilitate the Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
tourist
.The changes on island
Add an article
the island
shows
the development for Change the verb form
show
tourist
Change the noun form
tourists
such
as accommodation, swimming, restaurant and pier for boats etc.And these changes have been created without affecting the natural resources that much.
Before the facilities have been constructed, there are plants trees and beach
on the Correct article usage
a beach
island
.Many of
Change preposition
apply
places
on the Correct article usage
the places
island
are empty. The development to facilitate tourist
is accommodation facilities, Replace the word
tourism
restaurant
, reception, swimming on Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
beach
, Add an article
the beach
pier
for boating and so on. Interestingly, those Correct article usage
a pier
tourist
facility created without cutting down the plants and trees on the island
.Moreover
, most of the construction were
made near the Change the verb form
was
beach
.
Besides
, the footpaths and the
roads are created Correct article usage
apply
to
Change preposition
for
commuting
to facilitate Wrong verb form
commute
tourist
. The footpaths are made for Replace the word
tourism
Add an article
a walk
the walk
walk
to reach residing area, Wrong verb form
walking
swimming
on Correct word choice
and swimming
beach
.And the Add an article
the beach
roads
tracks are created for Fix the agreement mistake
road
Add an article
the vehicle
a vehicle
vehicle
to reach Fix the agreement mistake
vehicles
at
Remove the preposition
apply
restaurant
, reception and pier for boating.
In summary,these facilities were made for tourists Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
visit
Fix the infinitive
to visit
stay
Add the particle
to stay
at
Change preposition
on
island
for enjoyment without cutting the trees and plants.Add an article
the island
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, tourist, beach with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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