Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more
have connotations in structure or even support for the
of members in a family. In my opinion, I believe it may have positive effects for some reason.
The
reason why I believe
gender equality. It can be seen that at the moment,
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women go to work
of staying at home to be
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housework.
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previous families before, only men went to work and women stayed at home to do housework and take care of the children.
, the
in the family has changed, both wife and husband working together,
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opportunities are available for
of both sexes, leading to the fact that both men and women should exert effort to make ends meet.
,
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lady of the USA Hillary Clinton, a woman who was born in the era still has many privileges and iniquities about sexes, but she left many things outside and went straight to his career path.
, she graduated from the top University in the world, became
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lady and
was a former U.S secretary of state. The social development led to the
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Another reason why I believe
tendency is beneficial is that many extended families turn into nuclear families.
, Asia, which continent has rich cultures and traditions about love and unity of
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Asian connected with extended family, since
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century to now, the development of many large countries cause the mindset and lifestyle have been changed. A good example of it, many generations nowadays are more and more occupied with their work and they
have fewer children than their forefathers or in other
decided to live alone
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, many adolescents want to live independently to try and face many challenges or simply that need to have a private space for their living.
, many young
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seem to be much respected and considered as an integral part by adults.
To conclude, I opine that the model of a new type of family and
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been changed is a great development, due to the fact that many gender equality and privilege have been connotated.