Some people believe that the best way to improve the quality of healthcare in a country is to train and hire more doctors and nurses. Do you agree or disagree?

Healthcare

is a big problem in modern society. Many people argue that the

quality

of

healthcare

is determined by

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of trained and recruited medical staff. I agree

that

is

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important but I personally there are many other factors that play a crucial role in

this

issue On the one hand, I agree that human resources are the key

element

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of the health industry.

Firstly

, doctors and nurses are

the

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essential people in the care and treatment of patients, If there is a shortage of

this

resource, the patient will be put in jeopardy

due to

lack of good care.

For instance

, during the recent covid pandemic, the shortage of medical

staffs

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made the pandemic

is

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uncontrollable.

Secondly

, doctor and nurse 's qualification is obviously a determining factor in the

quality

of the

healthcare

. They study to improve their

knowlegde

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knowledge

and broaden their horizontal,

in

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the purpose of accessing

mordern

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modern

techniques to treat rare and difficult diseases.

On the other hand

, I would like to emphasize the

important

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of

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the government

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government

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government's

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role in improving the

quality

of the health sector in a country.Before

of

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all, the government needs to pay more attention to hospitals

as well as

medical facilities. The authorities should support more policies for medical staff to help them stabilize their life so that they could devote their willingness

for

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to

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healthcare

services.

Finally

,

facilicies

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facilities

are the factors contributing to

improve

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improving

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the

quality

of

medicare

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the medicare

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system.

For instance

, currently, private hospitals are investing in many modern

equipments

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equipment

and machines to help doctors access diagnosis and treatment more effectively and earlier. In summary, I believe that training and recruiting more medical staff is a good solution to increase the

quality

of medical examination and treatment.

However

, I

also

emphasize the

important

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of government and infrastructure investment to help

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achieve

achive

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achieve

the best

quality

of

medicare

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the medicare

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system