Some people think that children should be involved in making school rules. While others believe that only adults can make school rules. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that school
rules
can be a debatable subject. While
it is a commonly held belief that making school rules
should involve children
in it, there is also
an argument that opposes it. This
essay will analyse this
topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
On one hand, children
's involvement in rule-making can foster a sense of responsibility children
's involvement in rule-making can foster a sense of responsibility. In other words
, they will respect it more and it may lead to more realistic and relevant rules
because they understand their own needs and challenges better. In addition
, Children
participating in creating rules
can learn valuable life skills. For example
, such
as negotiation, critical thinking, and problem-solving.
On the Other Hand
, adults
have the experience and maturity necessary to foresee potential issues. it is also
possible to say that children
don't really know the appropriate boundaries so adults
can help set appropriate boundaries for safety and discipline. Moreover
,Adults
are also
more aware of legal implications because there are some rules
from the government. For instance
, they can ensure that school rules
comply with education regulations and policies.
In Conclusion, there are no easy answers to this
question. On balance, however
, I tend to believe that it is somewhat shared responsibility between both adults
and children
that could lead to more compliance with the rules
. because if it was by Sole adult control over rule-making could lead to a disconnect between rules
and students' perceptions, possibly causing resentment or non-compliance.Submitted by abdelaah.12 on
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