Some people think that children should be involved in making school rules. While others believe that only adults can make school rules. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
There is no denying the fact that school
rules
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While
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rules
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an argument that opposes it. Linking Words
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essay will analyse Linking Words
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topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
On one hand, Linking Words
children
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children
's involvement in rule-making can foster a sense of responsibility. Use synonyms
In other words
, they will respect it more and it may lead to more realistic and relevant Linking Words
rules
because they understand their own needs and challenges better. Use synonyms
In addition
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Children
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rules
can learn valuable life skills. Use synonyms
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as negotiation, critical thinking, and problem-solving.
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On the Other Hand
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adults
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adults
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Adults
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more aware of legal implications because there are some Linking Words
rules
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For instance
, they can ensure that school Linking Words
rules
comply with education regulations and policies.
In Conclusion, there are no easy answers to Use synonyms
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question. On balance, Linking Words
however
, I tend to believe that it is somewhat shared responsibility between both Linking Words
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children
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rules
. because if it was by Sole adult control over rule-making could lead to a disconnect between Use synonyms
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and students' perceptions, possibly causing resentment or non-compliance.Use synonyms
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