People should be responsible for the pollution problems caused by transportation, while others think govt should be responsible. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution problems
  • transportation
  • responsible
  • individuals
  • government
  • contribute
  • reduce
  • policies
  • regulations
  • environmentally friendly
  • invest
  • infrastructure
  • greener
  • carbon footprint
  • implement
  • taxes
  • incentives
  • sustainable
  • responsibility
  • shared
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