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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

#mass #communication #transport #societies #phenomenon #globalization #people #fear #loss #identity #reason
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 and lead to total loss of our own cultural identity?In
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 of our cultures.
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