You relocated to a new country for work. Write to your previous co-worker. In your letter – Tell him/her where you live in the new country – Describe how you feel – Explain what you are doing at work – Invite him/her for a visit.

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Dear Steve, It's been a long time since we were in touch. As you know, I moved to Canada

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year. I've changed a few places before

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settling in Halifax, Nova Scotia, where I feel really happy and accomplished today. Evergreen forests and chilly oceans enable me to fully enjoy life, which was not possible in the warmer climate. Apart from other things,

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location change helped me to boost my career. You probably remember how much I struggled with the repetitive tasks at Google. I am excited to tell you, that

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of daily coding, now at Amazon I am

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involved in quality assurance. In spite of requiring a lot more effort, that field is making me a better professional on daily basis, because the complexity of tasks is so extraordinary. You cannot imagine how beautiful the environment is in Halifax. With great pleasure, I am inviting you to come and spend a week together

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September, when the weather is the most comfortable. I will be looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Dmitry

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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7 paragraphs

178 words

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