It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

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There have been some debates on whether
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should against the natural rules and prevent
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from extinction.
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essay is going to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the issue and give my own opinions at the end of the article. On the one hand, some
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support that humans do not have to put an effort to save endangered
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, because
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is the normal situation for all species. They advocate that
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should focus on improving their life quality.
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, the government should construct more infrastructure to make
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's lives become more convenient and provide poor
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with financial support
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of wasting money on setting conservation to help
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.
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, others opine that humankind should definitely maintain species diversity, owing that the world cannot work appropriately without some kinds of
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and insects. Take bees
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.
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it seems like they are too small to make any contributions to the world; in fact, if bees become extinct it will lead to the extinction of an abundance of flowers because bees can help flowers to reproduce by collecting their nectar.
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, every animal is the food source of another one, so if there is only one kind of species that becomes extinct, it will
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destroy the whole food chain and contribute to some unexpected disasters. In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, I firmly disagree with the proposal which
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do not need to prevent extinction from happening. We should absolutely preserve
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,especially the ones whose habitat is destroyed by humans.
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