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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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 think that a lot of
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 and promoting human activities.
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, others. that it would be better to use the argue improve existing public
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 lines can carry a large number of passengers on goods at the same time, as well as connect many
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, compared to cars on the road, trains carrying thousands of passengers travel to another city without any incident along the way.
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 choose to invest their
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 for trains rather than in the city.
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 argue that quality over quantity. Since the trijmajority of the population lives in
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, public
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 provide easy access to different areas of
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, investing more
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 to improve public
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 or public
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 the same, both criteria must be balanced to ensure safety and save costs for everyone.

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Your opinion

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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