Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s
world
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we can find vast diversity in cultural and social aspects.
People
choose different
type
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types
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of clothing styles all around the world.
This
makes
themselves
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them
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special and different
than
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from
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others. Some
people
think that the
way
of dressing of individuals, it is obvious to guess their culture and personality. I believe that
this
could be possible to judge someone’s
character
and living custom
at
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some extent from their
cloths
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clothes
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. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss some arguments which will support my claim.
To begin
with,
majority
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the majority
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of different customs have their own traditional
dress
or the
way
of wearing some
cloths
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.
This
is because
this
kind
of dressing represents their ancient
people
and the
way
the
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way
they
have
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lived.
For example
, the tribe call Banjara in India,
they
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apply
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wear white top and trouser with a hat which usually
illustrate
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their early lifestyle. So, when
people
see someone in
this
kind
of
dress
, they can easily understand that
this
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this person
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people
are belongs
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to that particular cast.
Secondly
, it has been in practice for
such
a long time to
dress
certain
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in certain
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kind
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of clothes when you are at work. The type of
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clothes
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cloths
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clothes
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people
wear at work,
it
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gives
the
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indication
about
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their job position and
character
.
For instance
, if we see someone in an apron in the hospital with some
kind
of medical
treatment related
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equipment like a stethoscope,
then
we can guess that he/she would be a doctor.
As a result
, when we visit
this
kind
of
places
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place
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, we can recognize their
character
and job profession from their
dress
code. In conclusion,
although
we cannot be sure about individuals living
style
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styles
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and
character
by just having seen their clothing style, there are some common assumptions we can make to identify their culture and what
kind
of personality they acquire.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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