Some believe that politicians are the most influential people in the world, while others believe scientists are the most influential. Which side do you agree with and why? Provide specific reasoning for your answer.

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There is no doubt that individuals can influence

others

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by their say or actions. From my side of view, scientists all over the

world

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had the greatest impact on humanity more than

others

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scientific contributions and inventions are numerous and more beneficial to the

world

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on all levels. Without these efforts, humans would not be blessed with all

graces

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the graces

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enjoy

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recently.

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, fast transportation through different means, various home appliances, energy and more.

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, the influence of science touches every aspect of our

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, and

people

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can not survive without it.

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, the

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is depending on researchers to overcome the difficulties that the earth is currently facing, and to create new opportunities for

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to flourish and enjoy living on it.

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, the role of good politicians and leaders in enhancing their

people

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's livelihood and legacies is undeniable, but in my opinion, if it was found it would be limited by place and time boundaries and can not be common to the globe.

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to that politics is always described as a dirty game because when there is a conflict of interests the concerns will definitely place their interest over

others

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, in both

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wars, millions of citizens were sacrificed to satisfy the visions and causes created by their leaders.

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, politicians if they are good up to some limits would mostly be for some

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and not for all and

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is not the case when it comes to science.

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people

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have different influences on

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, scientists have a direct and greater influence on

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than

others

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