These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either to find a job or to study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

It is observed that increasingly
people
spend their pretty much time in other states, nowadays. there are both merits and demerits, and I suppose that the benefits would be greater than the drawbacks. On the one hand, going aboard would have some advantages. The
first
merit would be that
people
can get many experiences which cannot be gained in their own countries.
For example
, they can face
people
who have lived in different environments and experience different cultures by talking to and living with them.
Therefore
, during
this
process,
people
can widen their sight. The
second
thing would be that
people
can learn foreign languages during living in other nations. Once someone lives in other nations, he or she will be educated naturally languages there because in situations that he or she should use it.
On the other hand
, it has disadvantages which cannot be ignored.
Firstly
, it requires a lot of costs.
For
instance
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to settle there, significant money should be needed
such
as the cost of looking for a house and the flight to get there, and the considerable cost is needed for there. In the
second
place, in some
cases
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it can be a waste of not only hours but
also
money. If
although
someone goes abroad to work or study, they can not adapt to the environment there
such
as food, cultures, and so on and comes back to their country, it can become that throwing out their hour and money. In conclusion,
although
going to other places can be a risk, it has a bigger value enough to take a risk.
Thus
, I think that it should be encouraged.
people
spend their considerable time in other nations, nowadays. there are both merits and demerits, and I suppose that the benefits would be greater than the drawbacks.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exposure
  • Diversity
  • Personal growth
  • Language skills
  • Career opportunities
  • Networking
  • Professional connections
  • Enhanced education
  • Learning
  • Language barrier
  • Communication difficulties
  • Homesickness
  • Isolation
  • Cultural differences
  • Adaptation challenges
  • Financial constraints
  • Cost of living
  • Legal complexities
  • Administrative complexities
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