A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team - summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts - say how you think the company should spend some mone

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope my letter finds you well. I am writing

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letter regarding the feedback that you ask us for. Please be informed that I would like to take

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opportunity to thank you in advance for the donation either for sports or concerts. Donating either of the two is a big help for us.

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, sponsoring sports teams. Through

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, the youngsters will become physically fit and

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will be a big help to move them away from drugs or any bad activities.

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, the concerts will give them time to enjoy life and embrace

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once-in-a-lifetime experience since most of the tickets for the concert are very costly.

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, I would prefer to donate to sports activities.

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is the best option, surely, your money will not be wasted. I believe we really need

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kind of physical activity. I appreciated it if you could consider my suggestion. Should you have any concerns regarding my letter, please do let me know. Yours faithfully, Marivel Guza

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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