You have seen an advertisment from a couple who live in Australia, for somone who teach their two children your language for a year. write a letter to the couple, in your letter 1. explain why you think you would be suitable for the job 2. say what else you could do for the family 3. give your reasons for wanting the job

Dear
Mrs.
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Smith,
This
is regarding an advertisement in search of someone
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teach
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Sinhalese
for
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your two children. I would be delighted to take the opportunity to teach, and rest
assure
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they will enjoy learning the
language
too.
First
of foremost to give a glimpse of my background I’ve studied the
language
since I was in Grade
one
in School and well scored
for
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the
language
.
Currently
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I am studying for my diploma in teaching, whilst aiming that
one
day to conduct classes for native
language
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the
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children in Australia. Generally, conduct classes for an hour,
thereafter
I can assist you in other chores that you require an extra hand
of
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such
as I can pick your children from school
,
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after lunch
help
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them out with their homework and extra
one
hour to teach the
language
. Let me know your thoughts on
this
to help you. As I am presently unemployed and seeking
for
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a
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part time
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job where there is some teaching involved, which will
one
day help me to gain more experience. I would really appreciate
for
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your consideration. Yours Faithfully Nayomi.
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